Evaluatin Question 2.

"Told their story clearly, but possibly could have benefited from some more creative images."

"There is a good natural feel to the characters, they're very true to 'music video' characters. The ending is particularly good. A real music video feel, could have been the real thing."

" Story was simple but effective. Some of the camera/editing effects were a little distracting, sometimes less is more. The opening and closing titles were 'top class'. The colour accent didn't quite work probably due to the over cast lighting and it didn't work in the videos favour. The cars in the background distracted, a better location could have been selected. Cant they find a park bench like normal alcoholics??!!"

Above is our feedback from people for our production work.

I have learned from the audience feedback that although feedb ack is mainly down to personal preference that our location could have been in more than one place the reason we filmed where we did was because there was no disruption unlike our first location which was busy with cars and noises.

we learnt that some of our shots werent as steady as they could have been, this is something we could have taken more care with and do so if we were to do the process again. we have to work on our framing, as sometimes peoples heads where cut off.

we could have picked a better mes - en - scene for different parts of the song and video.